From b2ad2cf7c209b2135ab2ad60c620b8b95b8a91de Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mike Thompson <mike.thompson@day8.com.au>
Date: Fri, 14 Jul 2017 15:56:22 +1000
Subject: [PATCH] Final Omnibus tweak (docs)

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 docs/MentalModelOmnibus.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/MentalModelOmnibus.md b/docs/MentalModelOmnibus.md
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--- a/docs/MentalModelOmnibus.md
+++ b/docs/MentalModelOmnibus.md
@@ -140,9 +140,9 @@ like you to look back at the collection of events above the same way.
 > And, collectively, the Event 
 Handlers you register create the Virtual Machine on which this DSL executes. 
 
-> Data (events) are executed. All very Clojure.
+> Data (events) are executed by the VM you create. All very Clojure.
 
-I find James Reeves' talks to be a delight (video): [Transparency through data](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zznwKCifC1A) 
+I find James Reeves' talks to be excellent (video): [Transparency through data](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zznwKCifC1A) 
 
 ## It does Event Sourcing