From 45876d9944e45a62ffa1d9e65f525ad85345a109 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Amelia7689 <143401581+Amelia7689@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Dec 2023 12:54:14 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Update index.mdx (#162)

Home page copy updates
---
 src/pages/index.mdx | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/pages/index.mdx b/src/pages/index.mdx
index 406c6f9..6d4d35f 100644
--- a/src/pages/index.mdx
+++ b/src/pages/index.mdx
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
-title: Nimbus offers light and high-performing clients for the Ethereum Network
-description: Run Nimbus on lightweight devices or enterprise-grade servers with equal ease and peace of mind. Trusted by solo stakers and enterprise node operators alike.
+title: Light and high-performing Ethereum clients
+description: Run Nimbus on lightweight devices or enterprise-grade servers with equal ease and peace of mind. Trusted by solo stakers and node operators alike.
 ---
 
 import {
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ import {
 
 <Box top={{ xs: 32 }} bottom={{ xs: 144, lg: 216 }}>
   <HeroTitle>
-    {'NIMBUS OFFERS LIGHT AND HIGH PERFORMING CLIENTS FOR THE ETHEREUM NETWORK'}
+    {'LIGHT AND HIGH PERFORMING ETHEREUM CLIENTS'}
   </HeroTitle>
   <HeroDescription>
     {'Run Nimbus on lightweight devices or enterprise-grade servers with equal ease and peace of mind. Trusted by solo stakers and enterprise node operators alike.'} 
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ import {
         <ShowcaseCard
           index={4}
           name="Resilient"
-          description="Nimbus includes several features to improve redundancy and resilience. For example, distributed keystore support allows for pairing a single Nimbus instance with multiple Web3Signer servers. If one of the instances fails, another takes over. Plus, Nimbus can support multiple Beacon Nodes, creating redundancy and resilience against downtime."
+          description="Nimbus boosts resilience with distributed keystore support for pairing with multiple Web3Signer servers. It also creates redundancy and resilience against downtime by supporting multiple Beacon Nodes."
         />
       </Grid.Item>
     </Grid>
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ import {
     title="Community Suppport"
     columns={2}
     description="Nimbus is trusted by Ethereum validators diverse in both size and operating requirements. But don't just take our word for it."
-    label="Get Nimbus"
+    label="Try Nimbus for yourself"
     href="https://nimbus.guide/quick-start.html"
     target="_blank"
   />
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ import {
   <CallToActionSection 
     columns={1}
     title="Free and open source"
-    description="We're building Nimbus as a common good with liberal licensing to allow for the widest deployment of Ethereum possible."
+    description="Nimbus is being developed as a common good with liberal licensing to enable the broadest deployment of Ethereum possible."
     label='Donate'
     href="https://etherscan.io/address/0xDeb4A0e8d9a8dB30a9f53AF2dCc9Eb27060c6557"
   />