Applying feedback from @blake

website/content/docs/connect/proxies/integrate.mdx

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ curl http://<host-ip>:8500/v1/agent/connect/ca/leaf/<service-name>
 
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-Call the [`/v1/agent/connect/ca/roots`] endpoint to validate the client certificate against the root certificates, e.g.:
+The cleint certificate from the inbound connection must be validated against the Connect CA root certificates. Call the [`/v1/agent/connect/ca/roots`] endpoint to obtain the root certificates from the Connect CA, e.g.:
 
 ```shell-session
 
@@ -61,19 +61,19 @@ The agent uses locally-cached data to authorize the connection and typically res
 
 ~> **Note:** This endpoint is only suitable for L4 (e.g., TCP) integration. The endpoint always treats intentions with `Permissions` defined (i.e., L7 criteria) as `deny` intentions during evaluation.
 
-The proxy can query the [intention match API](/api/connect/intentions#list-matching-intentions) endpoint, which lists intentions that match the proxy destination. The matches are represented in the native configuration of the proxy, such as RBAC for Envoy.
+The proxy can query the [intention match API](/api/connect/intentions#list-matching-intentions) endpoint on startup to retrieve a list of intentions that match the proxy destination. The matches should be stored in the native filter configuration of the proxy, such as RBAC for Envoy.
 
-For performance and reliability reasons, querying the intention match API endpoint is the recommended method for implementing intention enforcement. The cached intentions should be consulted for each incoming connection (L4) or request (L7) to determine if the should be accepted or rejected.
+For performance and reliability reasons, querying the intention match API endpoint is the recommended method for implementing intention enforcement. The cached intentions should be consulted for each incoming connection (L4) or request (L7) to determine if the connection or request should be accepted or rejected.
 
 #### Persistent TCP connections and intentions
 
-For a proxied service configured with the TCP [protocol], potentially long-lived TCP connections will only be authorized when the connections are established. But because many services, such as databases, typically use persistent connection pools, changing intentions to deny access does not terminate existing connections. This behavior violates the updated intention. In these cases, it may appear as if the intention is not being enforced.
+For a proxied service configured with the TCP [protocol], potentially long-lived TCP connections will only be authorized when the connections are initially established. But because many services, such as databases, typically use persistent connection pools, changing intentions to deny access does not terminate existing connections. This behavior violates the updated intention. In these cases, it may appear as if the intention is not being enforced.
 
 Implement one of the following strategies to close connections:
 
 1. **Configure connections to terminate after a maximum lifetime**, e.g., several hours. This balances the overhead of establishing new connections with determining how long existing connections remain open after an intention changes.
 
-1. **Periodically re-authorize every open connection**. The authorization call is inexpensive and should be a local, in-memory operation. Periodically authorizing thousands of open connections (e.g., once every minute) is likely to be negligible overhead, but doing so enforces a tighter upper boundary on how long it takes to enforce intention changes without affecting the protocol efficiency of persistent connections.
+1. **Periodically re-authorize every open connection**. The authorization call is inexpensive and should be a local, in-memory operation on the Consul agent. Periodically authorizing thousands of open connections (e.g., once every minute) is likely to be negligible overhead, but doing so enforces a tighter upper boundary on how long it takes to enforce intention changes without affecting the protocol efficiency of persistent connections.
 
 #### Certificate serial in authorization
 
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ leaf certificate.
 
 For outbound connections, the proxy should communicate with a Connect-capable
 endpoint for a service and provide a client certificate from the
-[`/v1/agent/connect/ca/leaf/`] API endpoint. The proxy can call the [`/v1/agent/connect/ca/roots`] endpoint to verify the certificate served from the remote endpoint against the root certificates.
+[`/v1/agent/connect/ca/leaf/`] API endpoint. The proxy can call the [`/v1/agent/connect/ca/roots`] endpoint to verify the certificate served from the destination endpoint against the root certificates.
 
 ## Configuration Discovery
 
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ systems, such as init, systemd, supervisord, etc. If deployed within a
 cluster scheduler (Kubernetes, Nomad), proxies should run as a sidecar container in the
 same namespace.
 
-Proxies use the [`CONSUL_HTTP_TOKEN`](/commands#consul_http_token) and
+Proxies should use the [`CONSUL_HTTP_TOKEN`](/commands#consul_http_token) and
 [`CONSUL_HTTP_ADDR`](/commands#consul_http_addr) environment variables to
 contact Consul and fetch certificates. This occurs if the `CONSUL_HTTP_TOKEN`
 environment variable contains a Consul ACL that has the necessary permissions